Haiku - A 3 line poem

From My Book of Poems titled " Fir Ga Utha Prawasee "
Haiku is a Japanese form of 3 line poem --
the first line should have 5 words which can have a Sandhi -Shabd also
the second line will follow with 7 words
& the third & last line again has 5 words.
They usually should contain a glimpse of Nature but other languages who have borrowed this poetry form have liberalised it according to their culture. Here are some Hindi Haiku which I've written ....

[ 1 ]

Raton prehri
Jage Man praan ke,
Ekaki Jahan !

[ 2 ]
Narm ghaas hai
chalte paanv thame
Baith jaoon main ?

[ 3 ]
Chameli beechi
Mahekne lagi hawa
Khushbu jhonka !

[ 4 ]
Dheeme dheeme se ,
Re tu chul Manva
Raat baki hai !

[ 5 ]
Koi aata hai,
Wo saaj sajata hai
Geet gata hai

[ 6 ]
Aasmaan per
Ek nanhee Chidiya
Main Jameen per !

[ 7 ]
Laal Gulab
Khilkhilata Baag
Haree Tehni !

[ 8 ]
Sinduri Genda
Muskaye Jaymala mein
Dulha magan !

[ 9 ]
Nadee Kinara
Bikhra hai sannata

dhoop chadhee hai !

[ 10 ]
Rashmi Rath
Surya prachi dish se
Ug aaye hain !

[ 11 ]
Koyee bulata
Bansuri meethi bajata
Hook uthata

[ 12 ]
Sun ri Sandhya
Shukra tarak raag
Kshitij paar

[ 13 ]
Rain Suhanee
Jhilmilateen Raatein
Meri Saugaten !

[ 14 ]
Haree doob pe,
Thirakte ye paanv
Man Hiran

[ 15 ]
Paniharin
Peeli Chunri bheegoye
Gagri Tori ...

[ 16 ]
Tulsi Kyara
Sheesh nawanteen Mata
Lipa Aangan

[ 17 ]
Her Singaar

Jhir jhir jharte Man Aangan


[ 18 ]
Ram Lakhan
Chalte Kantak Van
Sang Jaanki !

[ 19 ]
Dhare Shabree
Jhoothe ber Prabhu ko
Bhakti Nirmal

[ 20 ]
Champa Kali
Lajwanti Mukhda
Radhe Laadli !

[ 21 ]
Mayur Pankh
Kaustubh Mani Haar
Vyjayanti Ka !

[ 22 ]
Yamuna Teere
Kadamb Chaiyan Tale
Hare Murar !

[ 23 ]
Dhan Joban
Aavan javan hain
Naam Sumer

[ 24 ]
Paap punya ki
Gathree Tan kaya
Taj Maya !

[ 25 ]
Chale Senani
Ran Kshetra mein yuddha
Jay - Vijay !

[ 26 ]
Pawan Ganga
Ram Charit Katha
Amar Gatha

[ 27 ]
Maha Bharat
Ved Vyas ki Vani
Jag Tarini !